Primitive Black

Primitive Black
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"Speke assumed Ham was the first “Black”, which supposedly justified slavery and was the reason why Africans were apparently “primitive” and “ugly” (quoted in 51)."

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"Speke attempted to justify slavery by making the false assumption Ham was the first "black." This assumption led to his reasoning for why Africans were allegedly "primitive" or "ugly.""

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